I have some questions written in the document itself, including under "more details." Additionally, I'd like feedback on the scope of this project idea (my biggest challenge!), how to go about the Existing Solutions section, and maybe some direction regarding a beginning search for literature. I have some sources collected, but am unsure about an appropriate amount or range at this stage.
As you can see, I switched my focus to what should be a more narrow, observable phenomenon. And it's a project that I hope to actually develop with a faculty member. I appreciated your feedback earlier, and look forward to your thoughts!